tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1296769989261398998.post2720525423463723778..comments2023-10-08T06:26:22.121-07:00Comments on Liquid Mind, Sanguine Soul: What Is Left BehindCiCihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02466038341689494316noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1296769989261398998.post-65418278587267561432012-12-18T19:09:53.067-08:002012-12-18T19:09:53.067-08:00The theme of abandonment is very strong. I like th...The theme of abandonment is very strong. I like that you chose a picture along with your words to make the fiction seem very real.Heidrun Khokhar, KleinsteMottehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16174142810114806410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1296769989261398998.post-59814801631286494262012-12-13T23:10:02.293-08:002012-12-13T23:10:02.293-08:00What a poignant story to glean from this scene. Th...What a poignant story to glean from this scene. That takes a lot of imagination, talent and vision. Seems like there could be a short story (or even a book) inside you...Stickup Artisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00028394186285973772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1296769989261398998.post-67225636370723640372012-12-13T05:16:05.274-08:002012-12-13T05:16:05.274-08:00Happens far too much!Happens far too much!Rock Chefhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11259561583833857901noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1296769989261398998.post-5849275780663025652012-12-12T12:56:16.619-08:002012-12-12T12:56:16.619-08:00Made my heart ache. Your writing is wonderful. Made my heart ache. Your writing is wonderful. Claudya Martinezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17034216831504207496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1296769989261398998.post-39258488378522077052012-12-12T08:27:50.958-08:002012-12-12T08:27:50.958-08:00I'm in agreement with the previous comments - ...I'm in agreement with the previous comments - a fiction based on real life. Bill Lislemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15187273560129198423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1296769989261398998.post-57251440568718778332012-12-11T15:57:27.570-08:002012-12-11T15:57:27.570-08:00Well written, and as we all know, there is much tr...Well written, and as we all know, there is much truth in any story. <br /><br />I watched an very old, feeble man totter to his car yesterday as I went into the grocery story. He was parked next to me. When I returned, after shopping for about a half hour, he was on the passenger side, arguing with a young woman in the driver's seat. He wanted his vicodin, which I figured out she must have been in the store's pharmacy, picking up for him. I, like you, thought, this would make a good story. Unlike you, I've not written it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1296769989261398998.post-29022516027407048672012-12-11T13:28:51.764-08:002012-12-11T13:28:51.764-08:00Like the others, I felt relief to know it was fict...Like the others, I felt relief to know it was fiction.. this time. I had neighbours like that for about one year. I could overhear all sort of heartbreaking things happening in that house. I feared for the safety of the women (it was two young couples, each having had a baby within a couple of weeks of one another) and the infants. Police were called by other neighbours and myself on numerous occasions. Your art does indeed imitate life.Hilaryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12787493532006658679noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1296769989261398998.post-51535686683478352152012-12-11T08:06:34.290-08:002012-12-11T08:06:34.290-08:00Whew, I'm glad it was fiction. But I know tha...Whew, I'm glad it was fiction. But I know that scenario is all too common.<br /><br />Wonderfully written, CiCi. I would love to read more fiction from you!Abbyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853360875281742784noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1296769989261398998.post-9501981104679103482012-12-11T06:33:52.997-08:002012-12-11T06:33:52.997-08:00I was about to say that was rather sad. I was about to say that was rather sad. Adamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08051255914419363819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1296769989261398998.post-43652001819506087482012-12-11T06:32:46.665-08:002012-12-11T06:32:46.665-08:00Very well written Cici, and an interesting take fr...Very well written Cici, and an interesting take from watching the girl with her baby.Jeaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04810126999695733332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1296769989261398998.post-59810777386037777702012-12-11T06:17:39.655-08:002012-12-11T06:17:39.655-08:00This story may be fiction, but it's definitely...This story may be fiction, but it's definitely one that many of us have experienced, one way or the other. It makes it easy to understand my feelings about them, CiCi. Maybe you can write a story about the new baby's wonderful life after the move. DJanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07152183871573797791noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1296769989261398998.post-75129465061626995732012-12-11T04:38:19.669-08:002012-12-11T04:38:19.669-08:00Sad but well written story. Funny how this time of...Sad but well written story. Funny how this time of the year can make us bloggers reflective. LL Cool Joehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13916666100971008775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1296769989261398998.post-51511181653975937232012-12-11T03:25:06.856-08:002012-12-11T03:25:06.856-08:00what a heart rending story...while fiction it has ...what a heart rending story...while fiction it has all the reality of life...and one that many live...growing up with out a parent and being unable to understand why they make up their stories to fill in the gaps....well told cici...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1296769989261398998.post-67109927552144507872012-12-11T01:10:38.417-08:002012-12-11T01:10:38.417-08:00I'm glad to know this is fiction. All too oft...I'm glad to know this is fiction. All too often, it IS true and eerily similar. With just a few minor changes, this could be my story.Ms. Ahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06263882972749791087noreply@blogger.com